A detailed, sentence-level evaluation of the first 5,000 words of your novel. I will edit your work for grammar, spelling, and clarity. I will make suggestion regarding dialogue, flow, and consistency regarding characters and plot development where appropriate.
This option will address the following:
- Spelling, grammar, syntax, punctuation, hyphenation and capitalization
- Dialogue expression: style, tagging and punctuation
- Use of tenses
- Letter, word, line and paragraph spacing
- The effectiveness of pace and flow
- Cliché and awkward metaphor
- Telling vs showing prose
- Character and plot level consistency where appropriate
I am also happy to discuss relevant details such as setting, world building, and subplot development and will provide suggestions in a detailed PDF report.
Format: Microsoft Word Document
Price: $350 per 5,000 words