Mini Line Critique

A detailed, sentence-level evaluation of the first 5,000 words of your novel. I will edit your work for grammar, spelling, and clarity. I will make suggestion regarding dialogue, flow, and consistency regarding characters and plot development where appropriate.

This option will address the following:

  • Spelling, grammar, syntax, punctuation, hyphenation and capitalization
  • Dialogue expression: style, tagging and punctuation
  • Use of tenses
  • Letter, word, line and paragraph spacing​
  • The effectiveness of pace and flow
  • Cliché and awkward metaphor
  • Telling vs showing prose
  • Character and plot level consistency where appropriate


I am also happy to discuss relevant details such as setting, world building, and subplot development and will provide suggestions in a detailed PDF report.

Format: Microsoft Word Document
Price: $350 per 5,000 words

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