For writers who want sentence-level critique focused on specific sections between 2,500 to 5,000 words in length. I will provide analysis, proofreading and suggestions to help your prose flow and strengthen your chapters. Special attention will be given to character consistency and plot development where appropriate.
The following will be addressed with this option:
- Spelling, grammar, syntax, punctuation, hyphenation and capitalization
- Dialogue expression: style, tagging and punctuation
- Use of tenses
- Letter, word, line and paragraph spacing
- The effectiveness of pace and flow
- Cliché and awkward metaphor
- Telling vs showing prose
- Character and plot level consistency where appropriate
You will also be provided with a style sheet describing all my decisions regarding hyphenation, numbering, capitalization, spelling variation, punctuation style and idiom usage.
Format: Microsoft Word Document
Price: $50 per chapter (up to approximately 10,000 words per chapter)
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